Remembering the Moon Wrong

Posted: February 12, 2015 in free verse, love, poetry
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What if we remember the moon wrong
And toast to it before it’s full.
Does it mean the same?
Is it as real or of value?
Proclaiming the nearly full moon.
Reaching out to the hope of the moon.
But you must first know it.
Is what you give as real?
What is it that’s given back?
Is it no more real than
the full moon a day early?
Is it no more than an early moon
With your hopes and promises as full?

DSS

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Comments
  1. Hopes and promises fill many slivers of evenings… that early toast allows for longer adoration: never a bad thing…and never too late to begin

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  2. Beautiful thought-provoking poem! 🙂
    We must always hang onto the hopes and promises! 🙂
    Every night at sunset I take a walk to watch the sun go down and the moon rise. I feel akin to the moon and the night sky…it is there I find my place and my “salvation”. 🙂
    HUGS!!! and ❤ !!! 🙂

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  3. beautiful and thought provoking.

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  4. ~ Sadie ~ says:

    “What if we remember the moon wrong
    And toast to it before it’s full.”
    What if we do??
    Just love this poem . . .

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